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Post by |× White Raven ×| on May 27, 2010 14:01:40 GMT -6
And I am waiting there,
Name;; Okami
Gender;; Female
Hair Color;; Fair blonde (Though she constantly dyes it white)
Eye Color;; Dark brown, in the right light sometimes appear an auburn
Age;; 12 Years
Race;; Japanese
Height;; 4' 9"
Markings;; She has a tatoo of a wolf howling on her left ankle
To catch them.
Personality;;
Okami is usually a very quiet and calm young girl. She prefers reading to talking, and being alone then with crowds. Even though she likes to be alone, the silence it brings terrifyies her. The quiet seems to scream to her that she is alone in this world, so she often hums or sings to herself to keep herself sane. Okami lost her parents when she was 11, and has been traveling the word by herself since. She stops at many places to die her hair so it stays white, like white wolves. Wolves are the animal she loves most. She often calls them "the original music creators", as she believes humans only got the idea from their beautiful howling.
Around people Okami is often shy and doesn't talk much, just nods and shakes her head. If there's a question she can't nod or shake her head to though, she does force herself to speak. Okami also knows how to protect herself. Her mother had given her her sword for her 11th birthday, for she knew she wasn't going to live much longer. Okami treasures the sword now, and holds it gently as if it was alive and could feel pain if she gripped it too tightly. She cherrishes life, even though at the time it seems like the world is against her.
History;;
Okami was born in a small cottage with her mother and father. They loved her dearly, and she grew up well with them. Her parents taught her how to protect herself at a young eage, for they knew even then they weren't going to live until she was old enough to really take care of herself. Both were sick often, but refused to go to any doctors, because they didn't trust them. Okami proved to be a fast learner, and was taught about everything the world had to offer. Even the bad things. Okami knew her parents were going to die soon when she was 10. She started forcing herself to learn faster then, and started learning how to see who people were through their eyes. See if they were bad people or kind. And in came in handy, for after awhile she started to learn how to tell if people were lying as well. When her parents finally died, all they left Okami was a sword, and a picture of the three together. She carries the sword and picture everywhere, her last memories of her parents.
Other;; Carries a sword and family picture
Theme Song;; "Wake me up When September Ends" by Green Day
Type;; Human
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Post by 1<3[)r@I<3 on Jun 6, 2010 13:00:17 GMT -6
At that age, you need to either find or create a caretaker. Also, that sword needs to be either a long knife, a short sword, or the Japanese equivalent. Katanas and other full sized swords are too heavy for a 12 year old girl, and even most 12 year old boys, to handle regardless of skill level. And the rules state that hair dye is non-existent. That includes bleaching the hair. White is only allowed in albinos, pure bloods, and half bloods. An exception to that would only be made in the case of an elderly character. Also, we have creation forms for a reason. Can you please make the corrections and attempt to follow the forms?
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Post by |× White Raven ×| on Jul 11, 2010 1:09:35 GMT -6
Ah? Oh, right. XD And yes, I'm aware their too heavy. She doesn't really use this one, she just carries it. And mh, yeah, I forgot about that. *shrugs* That be-eth okay, I shall change that in a bit. And about the caretaker thing, I planned on doing that, but she's gonna be living alone for a little while. That's fine, right? Because otherwise her history would have to be changed.. And okay okay, I'm sorry, but can you not lecture me for every little mistake? My gosh..
...and what the heck? Okay, the way you worded that last part was rude. Sheesh, calm down. I have a habit of using my own forms. I started off using yours but somehow it ended up my style. Sorry it wasn't perfect enough for you.. I'll fix it when I get a chance.
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Post by Neko on Jul 15, 2010 13:50:05 GMT -6
Lets avoid causing any fights guys okay? I am sure we can have this taken care of without any fights. Ice has a way of sounding like she is lecturing, I am sure she meant no offense to you when she was listing the things needed to be fixed. She has some valid points.
It is true a sword is very heavy and for a young girl to use one is just impossible, you could have her hold it however, as say a keepsake of someone she knew or something. As for a guardian, if you need one I have one that is already a guardian to another child, Her name is Aiko and I am sure she would be willing to care for another child, that is there if you want it to be, the option is up to you, I do not want to force you to use it if you have an idea already.
A few small details do need to be edited though, it helps us when we see the form that was made, it easier for skimming the profile and knowing where everything is, your form is very nice but if it would not be to much trouble if you get the time to fix it, that would be wonderful.
There is no hair dye so her hair color needs to be a realistic shade. If you want the white hair color I suggest making her an albino, as long as it is okay with Ice obviously. She would need to have blue or red eyes though. And as a little side note, the Japanese do not have blond hair without some sort of different race in them, like German or English, which the Japanese love to have in Manga, I cannot even count the number of manga/anime that has a mixed race like that.
Oh and a little fun fact, you are trying to say Wolf in Japanese right? Okami [like the videogame] is actually Ōkami or in otherwords Ookami. Okami is actually more like a female inn keeper, there are a few uses for the word but it is normally used for a woman who clears and such. Sorry this is coming in so late either way I got caught up in translating Kaze Hikaru and playing Regaia Densetsu.
I hope I did not come off as condisending, rude, or otherwise in any way that offends you. I just want to help your profile become acceptable as fast as possible so this site can get some activity. Either way welcome to the site and I hope you enjoy your say.
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